At first glance and first time through, you might not notice any errors exist.. and believe me, if someone decided to scope through my blog seeking errors, and if I didn't do the same to other sites, I might work myself up into a tizzy. However, I understand the nature of the game.
My point for these posts is to educate and inform.
My point for these posts is to educate and inform.
It must be fun contributing to this Google Glass Explorer Team. I like that they choose tech experts.. even self-proclaimed ones.
"As an early adopter I have been able to witness Google Glass evolve into the most innovative wearable technology device."
There is no "d" necessary.. the word should not be "evolved".
Of course, endless rewrites would allow multiple sentences conveying the same meaning.
{{Having been an early adopter of Google Glass, I have experienced firsthand its innovation and unlimited power which has defined it as the world's top wearable technology device.}}
Lofty, I know.. but I love lofty words.
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